Cutting Up The Script

The flight sponsorship video has been edited down from 4 minutes to 2.5 minutes, yet we still have some work to do to streamline and energize the story.

During our monthly team meetings with Casey, I colored the dialogue and cut up the script in pieces and we looked at trying another order arrangement for the story.  It’s good to have others’ perspective to see how it can be focused to communicate the message.

Now I’m working on another draft.  That’s part of editing a documentary story – working out the story to make it clear.

Next step: Recutting the images.

Though we have a limited number of images, pray that I can create energy with them.